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Introduction to a short story I never finished. Old, but I liked it enough to polish up a bit and put up here for a change. I'm a better writer than I am an artist.

Maybe I'll finish it someday.

When I wrote this, I wanted a completely androgynous, ambiguous main character. What do you think?

I know prose doesn't go over very well here on dA, but I thought I would post this nonetheless. It's short, so maybe it will!

Heavily inspired by J.D. Salinger's Catcher in the Rye.

EDIT: HOLY SHIT, A DD? Thank you so much ^neurotype! I'm speechless. :heart: I'm even more flattered knowing that I recently re-wrote and completed this short story a couple weeks ago for a creative writing class, but had to remove it from dA because I am seeking publication for it. This is so encouraging and wonderful. Thanks again, everyone!
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:iconskywarddestiny:
Amazing, I loved every bit of it!
I really hope to read more!
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:iconspectrosity:
I am seeking publication for the completed version of this story. So perhaps some day you'll be able to read more. Unless, of course, you note me with your email address and I can send you a copy of the finished, revised story. ;)
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:iconskywarddestiny:
I really do think you'll go far! You've got a gift!. . . Okay that sounds pretty cheesy, but I mean it!
Oh and that sounds great! I hope it's not a bother.
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:iconspectrosity:
Thank you very kindly :) :heart:

You're not a bother. XD
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`lintu47 Nov 4, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Congrats on the well deserved DD! :heart:
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:iconspectrosity:
Thank you so much!
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`lintu47 Nov 4, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
My pleasure :happybounce:
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:iconsmeltlikesafety:
I love the way your details - picking at her fingernails, and the way she treated the cat - they all let the readers see how the character really is like, without even having to explain it outright. Thank you for the really great read. :)
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:iconspectrosity:
I'm glad you picked up on those things! Thank you for your thoughts. :)
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~Sindima Nov 3, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
That was very interesting. Congrats on the daily.
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